One of my stories!

Here’s one of my stories that I wrote when I was 8 in 2006

The Rockhopper Mystery It all started when I was at the seashore, I saw a mysterious treasure map on the ground, it said, Key to map:  Club Penguin and Rockhopper Island.  It had Club Penguin and an island.  So a few days later, a ship came to shore.  I went on it and looked around.  It had lots on the ship.  It said on the gold, Rockhopper’s Special Gold.  I left the ship.  A couple months later I snuck  back on the ship at night.  A pirate came on the ship, I was terrified.  He started  to steer the ship.  It made a loud roaring sound.  I said in my mind, “I wonder who this guy is?” “Huh?” said the mysterious pirate.  I got very quiet.  “What’s behind me treasure?”  questioned the pirate.  “I’m a penguin from Club Penguin and my name is 900duncans,” I said.  “Me name is Rockhopper,” Rockhopper said.   “Oh I was guessing your name was Rockhopper because I looked at your gold it said, Rockhopper’s Special Gold,” I said.  “Yes, and why were ye lookin at me gold?” Rockhopper questioned.  “I just wanted to see it, nothing else,” I said.   “Oh,” Rockhopper said.  “I more thing?” I asked. “What?” Rockhopper questioned” Can I have some gold?  It’s very cool,” I asked politely. “Fine, here’s 10000 coins,” Rockhopper said.  “Wow!  Now I can get an igloo upgrade!  Thanks you very much!”  “Any time,” Rockhopper said.  I started to think about the gold then whispered, “I’m going to steal some of Rockhopper’s Gold today,”  “What did ye say?” Rockhopper asked.  “Just, talking to myself,” I said nervously.  “Let’s go to sleep,” Rockhopper said.  “Ok,” I said.  They both went to sleep.  At least one did 900duncans was still awake!  I tip-toed to the treasure and gold and I stole 1,000,000,000 coins.  I went to sleep with my 1,000,010,000 coins under my pillow.  We woke up and the coins were gone!  “What happened to my coins and treasure?”  Rockhopper asked. “I hate to tell you but, I stole them while you were sleeping and lost them,” I said. “It’s ok,” Rockhopper said. “It is!” I shouted.  “Yes,” Rockhopper said.  “I never get mad at penguins, especially little ones,” Rockhopper said.  “Let’s go back to Club Penguin!” I said.  “Ok,” Rockhopper said.  They sailed back to Club Penguin.  They are now in Club Penguin.  “Hey 900duncans,” Rockhopper said. “Yes?”  “Let’s go mining for gold!”  Rockhopper asked. “Ok,” I answered.  They went to the cave.  They started mining. “I think I found something, wait, and wait, yes!  I found gold! 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,coins!!!!!!!  We’re rich forever!!”  I shouted.  “Or, we’re banned forever, we ruined the mine,” Rockhopper said in a sad voice.  “Let’s go to my igloo,” I said.  “Ok.” Rockhopper said.  “Let’s make a giant party here, before we’re banned forever,” I said.  They put dance floors, coffee tables, bean bag chairs, TV’s and a bunch of other stuff.  They also had ALL of the clothes.  They had everything for members.  They opened their igloo.  10 minutes till they’re banned.  1 person came in 5 more people came in 9 more people came in then everybody in there got more people then a bunch of people they had a big party with 100 people in 1 room then the people at the party said, “Where did they go?”